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PLEASE edit and proof read using professor and peer comments.
Maureen Barber
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Hi Nancy Duarte, I am quite impressed on your proposal memo which you did prove some really great points. Though there are few issues noticed in the cause of reading through the proposal memo which I will like to draw your attention to.
*The paper has fewer in-text citations
*The paper format is well structured but the conclusion is quite brief.
*The diagrams on the paper has little or no explanations leaving the reader clueless on its purpose.
*A closer look at the references indicates the research source was based on a particular region.
*The page 1 and 2 of the paper is underlined on what purpose?
Maureen Barber
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Hello Duarte, I has the opportunity to ready through your paper which got detailed informations as to its purpose. Some points I want to draw your attention to are as follows
* The paper format is well done or structured, kudos to you on that.
* The Bibliography not well formated.
*There are alot of wrong spellings in the paper
*There are no explaination to diagrams.
* The paper lacks scholar resources to back up the ideas.
1 day agoJesus Banda Jr
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Hello Nancy, while reading your proposal memo I found your points really interesting. However there are a few problems I found while reading your proposal memo.
-The paper is well-formatted
-The diagrams have no explanation, leaving the reader clueless on their meanings
-The memo contains a few sentences that are incomplete
-The introduction is written and structured very well, but the conclusion is quite brief
-The paper altogether is structured very well with a good flow of ideas
Also, you will need at least five works cited. Don’t double space your WA6
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